我写的诗...给点意见...【铁一三九吧】

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我写的诗...给点意见...

THE WILLOW
The willow under the moon,
with the fresh air and dew.

The wind kiss the willow,
softly and gently.
the dew is the tear of the willow,
the kiss is the love of the wind.

Maybe they have left too far,
Maybe that is only a dream,
Maybe that is not ture.
But that is great
----the willow is the wind,
the wind is me.

That is my sweet dream
----the willow and the wind.

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1楼2007-10-30 21:38回复

THE DREAM
The willow is dancing under the moon,
the willow is singing near the river;
the wind is looking for the willow,
the wind is crazying about the willow.

Maybe that is only the love of the wind,
maybe that is only a dream.

The willow is the wind,
the wind is me.
That is my sweet dream,
--The willow and the wind.

2楼2007-10-30 21:39