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【黑历史不能在别人手上发布】JY 我的!元宵赛诗会《圣战之歌》

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28号截止 我刚才试过了 今天还能发!!
要写的赶紧
6个获奖名额 机会还是很大的!!
参赛方式见《圣战之歌》首页
而 这样的脑残黑历史 只能由我自己发
moonlight(纠错版)←虽然叫纠错版 但是 可能纠过反而更错 我也不知道纠得对不对
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there is a moonlight penetrating into my anima
even I was not allowed to face my phoebe yet
my heartfelt appreciation to that casual bet
for raising the curtain of our written drama
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I rushed in any path I could to get out of the dilemma
monsters lurk underground,liches shroud in haze,hierophant with a secret
branded by your love,I fought bloody battles far beyond budget
Only through the crach of psyche,the holy light reaches my alma*
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I move back and forth between life and death requesting your guidance
in the tensions of ultimate pursuit,shall we touch the god we believe
even if gloom invade deep into the marrow,I will not allow your absence
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I yield my heart as the unique gift and pray for acceptance
will you please treasure it up since it's a retrieve
eventually I can stay in a world of innocence
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既然两者都要押韵 做不到各个对应 那就随便意译了 中英不完全一致 嘛
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在我的生命里 有一道月光
哪怕从未直视月之辉煌
我感谢那不经意的一场牌戏
引我翻开邂逅的序章
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面对困境 我无措张皇
深海孤峰 妖域巫乡 人心庙堂
烙印发出辉光 骑士笼起圣像
圣光照入生命 只等灵魂裂开那一道伤
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在你的指引下 我穿梭生死
在生命的两极 信仰淡出 重现真实
即便暗灵入骨 我将不再孤独
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我将我的心献上 那是我唯一的礼物
置你心中 物归原主
赦我一生 无罪 介福
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@东君2013 说西幻要配14行诗 嘻嘻嘻嘻嘿嘿嘿嘿哈哈哈哈(ಥ_ಥ)
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今天刚刚百度了Shakespeare君 他说能用长单词就绝不用短的 总之……在不能自控的情况下 句子越来越长…越来越长……越来越长………嘿嘿嘿嘿哈哈哈哈呼呼呼呼(ಥ_ಥ)
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zhuangbility到这个份上 已经可以放弃治疗了
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*alma 西班牙语 灵魂
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我算是知道为什么从前英语作品里经常会冒出个别国单词了 没有韵脚啊!!!! 哈哈哈哈呼呼呼呼吼吼吼吼(ಥ_ಥ)
发去晋江的时候 竟然因为(ಥ_ಥ)不能显示 就把我的字后半截都吞了!!!
简直不能忍!!!
召唤@alu4649 给予致命打击


IP属地:上海本楼含有高级字体1楼2014-02-28 02:25回复
    继续魔法自爆
    知道为何ABBA的A韵脚是ma吗?
    因为in my life 我除了wife knife 找不到别的了!!!!
    于是就anima drama dilemma alma 一路装B!!!!
    本来还有个文凭diploma的 实在塞不进去了!!!!


    IP属地:上海3楼2014-02-28 02:47
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      其实 如果不在乎14行诗的所谓ABBA ABBA CDC CDC
      可以精简的 意思当然差点
      there is a moonlight in my life
      before I can face the moon by myself
      You must be the angel,Mr.Black Jack
      lead us to our destiny that destined one
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      trials and battles,I rushed in any path I could
      monsters underground,liches ineffable,clergy was a paradox
      branded by your love,I fought them without fear
      only through the crack of soul,the holy light reaches
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      I move back and forth between life and death
      close to the limit,touch the god we believe
      even if darkness invades,I still believe
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      I yield my soul as the unique gift
      will you please put me in your heart
      then I can prove my innocent


      IP属地:上海12楼2014-02-28 10:38
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        Joyce
        信之坚 得之敬
        学习着 他祷告 赐福于众
        做一颗流转于人们掌中的明珠
        业报焉 因缘焉
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        Alex
        虑之深 制之严
        传其道 授其业 守护在侧
        无尽的忠诚终将成就王中之王
        良师也 益友也
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        Hugh
        行之戾, 从之谜
        享险境 探虎穴 玩世不恭
        若天命指定一个逆天者
        注定乎 变数乎
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        Roger
        充之慧 明之道
        阅无尽 笔不辍 智者千虑
        时光的指缝中君子遗世而独立
        智者尔 书呆尔
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        Elvin
        欲之纯, 情之烈
        步徘徊 歌声随 语笑多情
        星辰指引下他眼底轻探未来
        永好兮 爱侣兮
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        Felid
        睨之骄, 持之礼
        笑满面 全不敌 烈吻缠绵
        为何要用伪装掩盖爱意我的阁下
        竞手矣 玩伴矣
        @alu4649 答谢革#命的战友阿鲁鲁
        不过Roger开始我就不认识了 翻的未必准 那个‘公爵’我也不知道是比喻还是本意


        IP属地:上海20楼2014-02-28 12:27
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          简版
          there is a moonlight in my life
          before I can face the moon by myself
          everything is the will of god,well no duh
          straight flush imply us how a destiny chould be
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          trials and battles,I rushed in any path I could
          monsters underground,liches ineffable,clergy was a paradox
          branded by your love,I fought them without fear
          only through the crack of soul,the holy light reaches
          .
          I move back and forth between life and death
          close to the limit,touch the god we believe
          even if darkness invades,I still believe
          .
          I yield my soul as the unique gift
          will you please put me in your heart
          then I can prove my innocent


          IP属地:上海22楼2014-02-28 12:51
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            嘿嘿
            结果出来了
            http://tieba.baidu.com/p/2975079269

            我好有钱啊!!!


            IP属地:上海56楼2014-04-12 22:40
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