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1楼2014-03-30 22:23回复
    Charming star
    In a summer night, I sat downstairs and the cool, the wind gently blowing to me, bring a cool and refreshing.
    Looked up at the night stars at this time, like a rich stone, like eyes, also ah twinkle bright sky, as if there is a sense of magic, can let a person infinite daydream, so I watched the night sky, the heart is belong to quiet, to pure static, all impurities precipitation into heart lake, I will be very quiet.
    The stars are like people? As an old saying goes: the good star light, star for the bad guys, dark. Will belong to me, is this the one in the vast xinghai? Think about it, my mind can not help but float to the bright sky.
    When I back, I was cool in the middle of the night, I sneezed, got up and say goodbye to the beautiful sky.
    Really beautiful!


    3楼2014-03-30 22:42
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