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【求助】求大神帮忙看下这段话有没有语法错误

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Could I have your attention,please?Thank you for giving me the opportunity to tell you about some news.
To begin with an international news,according to British Daily Mail report,an American,Jason Padgett after a head injury by a microphone attacked, began with a completely new way of looking at the world.Padgett found his vision changes, and began to notice something that he had never pay attention to details, and obsession with mathematics and physics.Although Padgett had never showed artistic talent before, but now he can draw the complicated geometry very accurately.The kind of situation that normal person suddenly become a mathematical genius after brain injury , only 40 cases around the world.Padgett now believe that everyone is a potential genius.


1楼2014-04-23 19:34回复
    看起来貌似没有什么问题


    来自iPhone客户端3楼2014-04-23 20:02
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      就是写一个美国人在遭受重创之后然后变神童,对数学和科学特别敏感,然后被媒体大肆报道,是这个吧?感觉句子重点一点都不明确,而且用一个复合句可以表达完的句子硬是被你分成无数个单句,看着真心累。。。


      IP属地:广东4楼2014-04-23 20:18
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        To begin with an international news, 我个人感觉挺老掉牙的。
        不如 An interesting news is that ......这种结构


        IP属地:北京5楼2014-04-23 20:42
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          是不是那个,后天性学者症候群


          IP属地:云南来自Android客户端8楼2014-04-24 08:43
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            mark


            来自iPhone客户端9楼2014-04-24 13:24
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