Nowadays, environmental degradation becomes a key issue. Ordinary people keep ignoring the problems and still adhere to their lifestyle, which aggravated the situation.
Many factors inhibit people from taking actions on that. One of them may involve the feeling of powelessness which is fact by people in face of these hugh problems.Environmental issues, such as global warming, excessive waste production, many people tend to blame those on the government or large companies. They believe those are entrusted with responsibilities to preserve our environment and they have little to do with that.
Admittedly, there are many things that individuals can do which can alleviate the situation partly. Using the public transportion is a good way, while it's less convenient than the private cars. But once that public vehicle is given priority, it will reduce the effect of carbon dioxide emissions significantly. Cultivating certain good habits is another solution as well, recycling domestic water

接上，
refusing chemical products are ways which lead us to a simpler life.
To sum up, government have to take step in environment protection, but all these efforts would fail if it's without individuals ' cooperation.
I strongly believe the idea that both of them should work together so as to make our environment better.

谁能写一篇小作文的范文给我看看啊，就怕写图表题

People have reachedan absolute consensus on environmental protection for a period, but there stillsome heated discussion on whether should people conduct it individually. It is suchan enormous project to preserve our earth that a considerable portion of peoplethink it is not realistic to preserve environment by only one person.
Actually,preserving environment just by one person is undependable. But if we, all ofthe humanities, do it stringently, we will reach the achievement of saving ourearth. That is why I insist on a mass of individual efforts gathering up willresult in a cosmic power. It is everyone’s sense of obligation that we should cultivatein daily life. In terms of household, people can conserve natural resources viacycling use of water and saving electric. As for market, they can reduce the frequencyof using air-condition and plastic bags, which will effectively control the environmentto deteriorate.
Obviously, to require everyone strict toconsume resources is not realistic. There are still a host of wasting andexcessively exploit natural resources, which not suppose to be maintained byindividual efforts. For instance, factories’ polluted air emission cannot betackled by the staff.
However, with the comparison of holdingnegative attitude towards individual power, making joint efforts by individiumis the better method for sustainable development. If the government could jointhe line of protecting environment and appeal to the whole society to developthe awareness of preserving environment, it motivates more individual people tosolving environmental problem.

A problem of modern society is the ever-increasing destruction of environmental pollution,with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.Some individuals hold the opinion that it is arduous for general population to solve this massive problem.Others argue that these problems only to be addressed by individual*s taking initiative action.
The farmer believes that they have nothing to do with protecting environment.Because government has the responsibility to the supervision and protection of the environment,so they should be taken the first place to combat this problem of pollution.However, these people neglect the fact that the government can*t solve every problem.They have advantages of education and guidance at the most.Withouting the efforts of everyone,the task of environmental protection would not be go on wheels.
The latter with the idea that environmental protection should be shared by everyone,which better according with the requirement of construction of civilization.All people san do something for it. First of all, individualscan make sure that they are ought to in the way that they dispose of waste. Forexample, you may easy to find such phenomenon of throwing plastics or in thepublic. These rubbish are put into the river, causing water be polluted, not tomention fishes living in it. And if used batteries throw casually, which willdestroyed the few areas of farmland. So we should raise the awareness of the conceptionof separate waste collection. Besides, vehicleexhaust pollution is another source of pollution to the environment. Everyonecan take public transport more to contain effectively air pollution. Last butnot the least, individuals can also come up with advise for the authorities, includingsome relatively strategies on how to publication and punishment . It is obviousthat in this way can make government’s measures more deep in people’s mind.
In myopinion, environmental protectionmust be into everyone’s action, only in this way can our younger generation notbe confronted with serious consequence.

原文：
The relevance of whether the environmental problems can be solved by individuals has been a topic of discussion.I will discuss both views about this issue.
Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve.To be honest,fierce environmental problems like the hole in ozone layer above the Antarctic,or the glaciers melting in the North Pole,they all beyond an individual*s control.It really seems nothing we can do to stop it.Moreover,few people face with the problems directly.Most of people won*t be threatened by the problems far away from them,so people just keep indifferent to these problems.
On the other hand,others believe that the problems cannot be solved until individuals take some actions.Whether an individual*s action will solve the problems is unknown,but nothing will be changed if he does nothing at all.Plenty of actions can be taken out to protect the environment,such as using more public transport to conserve fossil fuels,recycling paper and cans to make new environmental-friendly products and reduce one*s carbon footprint.It is easy for everyone to take these actions.In addition,governments should bring out more rules and regulations on limiting the release of toxic pollutants.By doing these,we can lead substainable development even if the problems are still far beyond to be solved.
My view is that environmental problems are probably too big for individuals to solve in short run,but we can change these fierce situation little by little,day by day.It will be the most efficient way that governments appealing more people to concerned about the significance of protecting our mother earth.
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To :我爱小寿
鸭圈写作课代表Alexander批改：
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As a conclusion 同学 你的文章太过于口语化了 逻辑也比较松散 对论点的展开不足 建议同学在语言下多下功夫 还有就是 雅思作文 要尽量少的出现第一人称 这样会显得不够客观 而且缩写是绝对禁止的。
By 鸭圈写作课代表Alexander

TASK1
The table gives some information about the length of high speed train in China,France and Japan in the year of 1990,2010 and 2020.
As we can see from the data,in 1990,China had no high speed train,while Japan had the longest length of 1200 kilometers.France is in the middle of them with 700 kilometers.
In 2010,the three countries all experienced a growth in the high speed train.China grew dramatically from 0 to 5800 over the 20 years,ranking the top in the table.By contrast,Japan increased slightly,more than doubled the figure in 1990.France also witnessed a significant growth from 700 to 2600.Its length was still the second longest among these countries.
It is particularly noticeable in 2020,the length of high speed train in China is projected to be the greatest,reaching to 13400 kilometers at that time.France and Japan both go up steadily,with the figure for 3900 and 3600 respectivly,Japan even grow slower than France and the gap between china and japan widens during the 20 years.
The table shows than china sees a considerable growth in the length of high speed train from 1990 to 2020,whereas japan and france rises with a slower pace.

大作文
Environment pollution has been a universal phenomenon that we have to face in recent years. However, whether could individuals make adifference to this condition has been a controversial issue. From my ownperspective, citizens play a dominate role in solving this problem.
Firstly, it is clear that individuals’behaviors have direct influences on the environment. Because theproblems such as water shortage and global warming derive from long-term human’activities. If people could develop habits of taking public transits aswell as using environmental-friendly products, they can improve air quality andrelieve the energy crisis. Moreover, governments and large companies consist ofmany citizens, which means that their policies and strategies rely on human’awareness. In this sense, the most crucial to the environment is notlocal authorities, but individuals themselves.
People who hold the converse opinion believesthat pollution is a severe question, which could only be solved by governmentsand large enterprises. Because the In order to preserve the ecosystem, theyshould shoulder their responsibilities to enact laws and promoteenvironmental-friendly products. What is more practicable is to lead people’green consuming habit via the public service advertisements. All ofthese is to control people’performances, whichdetermine the condition of environment.
In summary, individuals could change thesituation by the means of choosing low carbon lifestyle and raising their owngreen awareness. Meanwhile, governments and large companies should overtaketheir accountability to make a contribution at the macro level. Only by doingso, can we protect our unique planet .

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Nowadays, environmental degradation becomes a key issue. Ordinary people keep ignoring the problems and still adhere to their lifestyle, which aggravated the situation.
Many factors inhibit people from taking actions on that. One of them may involve the feeling of powelessness which is fact by people in face of these hugh problems.Environmental issues, such as global warming, excessive waste production, many people tend to blame those on the government or large companies. They believe those are entrusted with responsibilities to preserve our environment and they have little to do with that.
Admittedly, there are many things that individuals can do which can alleviate the situation partly. Using the public transportion is a good way, while it*s less convenient than the private cars. But once that public vehicle is given priority, it will reduce the effect of carbon dioxide emissions significantly. Cultivating certain good habits is another solution as well, recycling domestic water.
refusing chemical products are ways which lead us to a simpler life.
To sum up, government have to take step in environment protection, but all these efforts would fail if it*s without individuals * cooperation.
I strongly believe the idea that both of them should work together so as to make our environment better.
第一段aggravated改为aggracates，时态保持一致。Many factors后面那句有点摸不到头脑，powelessness应该是拼写错误，which is fact by people没有这样的说法，建议你回复下你这句要表达的意后我再给你改。
再接下来的那句“Environmental issues..."主语是这个，但是such as列举完之后，主语又换成了many people,这就偷换了主语，然后意思也表达不明确。下面一段无明显语法错误，但是论据不够说服力，句式多样性上也可以多下功夫.
take step【s】复数形式才对。【it*s】严重错误！雅思考试中严禁缩写！ 总体来说，文章观点明确，复杂句式用得比较单一，至少可以把which换成that用用啊。论据不够有力，词汇和句式上也要多下功夫。
BY 鸭圈写作课代表Echo

The environmental issues are always concerned by people.With the development of personal morality ,most of the people believe that we should protect environment .However ,some people think the environmental problems are too big and citizens can not address these issues by individual .My view is that we can actually do it with little thing.
There is no denying that protecting environment is a responsibility of everybody,we can start with little thing. we cannot overlook individual strength because union is strength.Fox instance,if everyone keeps their own home and road clearly,then the whole world will be clearly .What is more,the individual action can impact others action,If one person protect environment every time,other people will follow he to do together. We should note one*s strength,this is a key to solve environmental problems.
Althought we have reason to believe that the government can help citizens to protect environment ,it does not mean that individual action can not solve this issue .One problem associate with environmental friendly is that individual pollution is the main reason for environmental issue . The main explanation is that most of the people have not promoted one;s awareness of protecting environment .Fox example,the government require people to do this but citizens still overlook it and thow rubbish everywhere,the real plan of environmental friendly cannot be achieving.
Overrall,individual action is a key to protect environment ,union is strength and we should do ti together.In addition ,we can also do this with the government. Only in this way ,can we address this issue really.

The chart presents inforation about the length of express train in three countries(China,France and Japan) among three different years.
An increasing trend to varying degee can be found in these countries. The length of high speed train climbs dramaticaly in China, rising to 13400 in 2020 as expected, while there is any train in 1990.
Similarly, the length of express train both in Japan and France also experience a remarkable growth from 1990 to 2020.The figure in 2020 will be over five times as much as that in 1990 in France, strating at 700 in 1990. Also, there is a three fold increase in Japan ,with 1200 in 1990, rising to 3600 in 2020.
It is clear that the legth of high speed train in both France and Japan overnumber that in China in 1990. However, the number in China was 2 times more than that in France and Japan (2600 and 2500 respectively).
Overall,the length of express train in China ranks top among three different countries , exceeded three times more than the number both in Japan and France in 2020 as projected. while a relatively growth can be foun also be seen in Janpan and France.