前言
为了庆祝一周年,我特地准备了流月城人物诗,本人虽学过平仄,但学得很不到位,所以写的诗歌基本上只追求流畅和押韵,其他的作诗技巧并未运用,请各位诗词大神轻拍,各位吧友多多支持
古剑大吧原贴地址:http://tieba.baidu.com/p/3238685939
先贴一些以前做的诗词配图:苏轼的《蝶恋花》
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为了庆祝一周年,我特地准备了流月城人物诗,本人虽学过平仄,但学得很不到位,所以写的诗歌基本上只追求流畅和押韵,其他的作诗技巧并未运用,请各位诗词大神轻拍,各位吧友多多支持
古剑大吧原贴地址:http://tieba.baidu.com/p/3238685939
先贴一些以前做的诗词配图:苏轼的《蝶恋花》
![](https://imgsa.baidu.com/forum/w%3D580/sign=7149a97737a85edffa8cfe2b795509d8/b2c3194f78f0f73662bb8c260955b319eac413f3.jpg)
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