最好分段写 别一大段全下来

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it is in.........i see

首先建议把第二行while改成that

希望可以详细一点，具体到某个词，感激不尽。

楼主字好棒，怎么练的

一个字，俩个字，仨个字，四个字，五个字，够了，水经验。呵呵

we were , not was

喜欢字

Memory tells 改成，Recalling the past few days.it was in January 1st,a sunny Saturday that we started our practical job at a personal bookstore. It was near the the University Town and in possession of various books which were absolutely interesting and readable. What's more, the owner of the bookstore attracted the customers not only by colorful posts but also by holding activities about transforming the discount books into a new one.As for me, the daily life there was meaningful and I felt tired but energetic. Especially,the work about moving books was something of a sport which did strengthen my body.
我改了一些我看到的小错误，楼主你可以参考一下，嘻嘻，参考价值不大

电脑阅卷一般快的很，分数给的都很随意。没得高分别在意

@夜雨寒楼