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其实吧里已经有司徒君的音乐推荐楼了,不过不知道自己能不能用,另外主要是想放一些歌词翻译,所以就干脆开个新楼吧。1L祭天。


IP属地:广东1楼2015-04-17 19:09回复
    然后放几个以前的翻译吧。以下四首均出自甜池。感觉一首正常番的歌曲放完之后就该BL作品全轰炸了……
    《I'm in blue》。充满迷茫感的一首歌。
    http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6iL64a
    「I'm In Blue」
    PCゲーム sweet pool original soundtrack-fragment-
    作词\作曲\编曲Yuzi
    歌 Pale Green
    The pain it still remains
    痛楚依然残存
    And I'll just get denied
    我终会被否认
    The feel it still remains
    感觉依然残存
    Someday I'll fly away
    某天我将远行
    So let it all go by
    就让一切随风消逝
    Looking at deep blue sky
    仰望这片深邃青空
    The vision like a shining star
    梦境灿若闪烁星辰
    I don't know where to go
    我不知该何去何从
    I know I'm going blind
    我知道我将失去光明
    When will I ever find love?
    何时才能找到真爱?
    If you read my mind
    若你读懂我的心绪
    Please, please leave me alone
    恳请你,请你留我独处
    I'm in blue
    我身处忧郁之中
    Sometime I'll fade away
    也许有天将失去踪影
    I'm in blue
    我身处忧郁之中
    Sometime I'll slip away
    也许有天将不告而别
    I'm in blue
    我身处忧郁之中
    Sometime I'll fade away
    也许有天将失去踪影
    I'm in blue
    我身处忧郁之中
    Sometime I'll slip away
    也许有天将不告而别
    And fade away
    然后失去踪影
    The hills that test my will
    考验我意志的峰峦
    How can I ever climb the slope?
    要怎样登上其山麓?
    And here comes the sadness
    于是悲伤汹涌来袭
    I don't know, I don't know where to fall
    我不知道,不知道自己堕向何处
    I know I'm going blind
    我知道我将失去光明
    When will I ever find truth?
    何时才能找到真相?
    If you read my mind
    若你读懂我的心绪
    Please, please leave me alone
    恳请你,请你留我独处
    I'm in blue
    我身处忧郁之中
    Sometime I'll fade away
    也许有天将失去踪影
    I'm in blue
    我身处忧郁之中
    Sometime I'll slip away
    也许有天将不告而别
    I'm in blue
    我身处忧郁之中
    Sometime I'll fade away
    也许有天将失去踪影
    I'm in blue
    我身处忧郁之中
    Sometime I'll slip away
    也许有天将不告而别
    And fade away
    然后失去踪影
    I'm just little child
    我只是个孩子
    I'm just little child
    我只是个孩子
    I'm just little child
    我只是个孩子
    -Fin-


    IP属地:广东5楼2015-04-17 19:45
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      《Diving Deep》
      http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDq5x1R
      「diving deep」
      PCゲームsweet pool original soundtrack-fragment-
      作词\作曲\编曲Yuzi
      歌Pale Green
      A good thing going
      美好逐渐流失
      Every time we embraced
      每次我们拥抱之时
      I had tasted love like hot blood
      我曾尝过鲜血般炽热的爱
      But you remember
      但你记得吗
      that madness in your side
      你那心底的疯狂
      I'm diving deep
      我深陷着
      Now gliding in the sky
      而今滑落天际
      So twisted
      思绪纠缠
      And I fell down
      我颓然倒下
      When will you come to rescue me?
      你何时会来给我救赎?
      You played with the ghosts in the back ofmy head
      你与我脑后的魂灵嬉戏
      I'm diving deep
      我深陷着
      Now gliding in the sky
      而今滑落天际
      Can't you see my eyes?
      你看不到我的双眼吗?
      Can't you hear my voice?
      你听不到我的声音吗
      Can't you feel my skin?
      你感觉不到我的肌肤吗?
      You're leaving me there
      你离我而去
      I am…Bleed inside my eyes
      我……目淌血泪
      So twisted
      思绪纠缠
      And I fell down
      我颓然倒下
      When will you come to rescue me?
      你何时会来给我救赎?
      You played with the ghosts in the back ofmy head
      你与我脑后的魂灵嬉戏
      I'm diving deep
      我深陷着
      Now gliding in the sky
      而今滑落天际
      Can't you see my eyes?
      你看不到我的双眼吗?
      Can't you hear my voice?
      你听不到我的声音吗?
      Can't you feel my skin?
      你感觉不到我的肌肤吗?
      You're leaving me there
      你离我而去
      I am…Bleed inside my eyes
      我……目淌血泪
      -Fin-


      IP属地:广东6楼2015-04-17 19:51
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        《The Red Road》。“No forever”。
        http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTpDnH9
        「The red road」
        PCゲームsweet pool original soundtrack-fragment-
        作词\作曲\编曲Yuzi
        歌Pale Green
        All the ways I know are beautiful
        我所知的路途都如此美丽
        Dreaming of my ghost
        梦见我的魂灵
        I walking down the red road
        正踏上那条赤色之路
        How long, I'll never know
        路有多长,我永无从知晓
        Brush away the memories
        抹去记忆
        Lighting up the hollow of the hand
        点亮掌心一捧光芒
        It's my way
        这是我的路
        I'm waiting for this moment
        我等待着这一刻
        Close my eyes and say "Noforever"
        闭上双眼,说出“没有永远”
        No
        没有
        Forever
        永远
        I'll eat out my heart, so beautiful
        让心支离破碎,如此美丽
        Dreaming of my ghost
        梦见我的魂灵
        I walking down the red road
        正踏上那条赤色之路
        How long, I'll never know
        路有多长,我永远无从知晓
        Brush away the memories
        抹去记忆
        Lighting up the hollow of the hand
        点亮掌心一捧光芒
        It's my way
        这是我的路
        I'm waiting for this moment
        我等待着这一刻
        Close my eyes and say "Noforever"
        闭上双眼,说出“没有永远”
        No
        没有
        Forever
        永远
        I'll eat out my heart, so beautiful
        让心支离破碎,如此美丽
        Dreaming of my ghost
        梦见我的魂灵
        I walking down the red road
        正踏上那条赤色之路
        Good bye, my soul
        永别,我的灵魂
        -Fin-


        IP属地:广东7楼2015-04-17 19:58
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          《Miracles May》,很温柔的歌。相信终会重逢。
          http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD6K3yp
          「Miracles may」
          PCゲームsweet pool original soundtrack-fragment-
          作词渡边カズヒロ\作曲\编曲矶江俊道
          歌いとうかなこ
          The rain

          Clearing above
          在上空消散
          The pain

          Is going away…
          正渐渐远离……
          All the tears that we shed
          所有我们流过的泪
          Hope the clouds don't get in the way
          祈祷云翳不要阻挡
          For tonight we take our grief
          因为今夜我们将怀抱忧伤
          To the stars
          飞向星空
          Our hope
          我们的希望
          So far away
          如此遥远
          Our time
          我们的时光
          Running out fast fast fast
          流逝得太匆忙匆忙匆忙
          All the days that we tried
          所有我们经历的日子
          Hope the stars don't fade away
          祈祷群星不要隐去
          For tonight we dive in deep
          因为今夜我们将深深沉潜
          Into the skies
          融入天空
          Turn out the lights
          熄灭灯光
          Wake up in your dreams
          在你的梦中苏醒
          In a doze of slightest hope
          惺忪中闪过最轻柔的希望
          Something may happen
          有些什么将要发生
          Look up at the skies
          仰望穹宇
          Make a wish, for your dream
          为你的梦许下愿望
          Something just may
          有些什么也许就
          Miracles may
          奇迹也许就
          Come to you…
          会降临于你……
          In the road yet unseen
          在仍旧未知的路上
          I believe our hearts meet again
          相信我们的心终会重逢
          For tonight we stand under the
          因为今夜的我们正伫立在
          Same skies
          同一片天空下
          Turn on the lights
          点亮灯光
          Wake up in your dreams
          在你的梦中苏醒
          In a doze of slightest hope
          惺忪中闪过最轻柔的希望
          Something may happen
          有些什么将要发生
          Look up at the skies
          仰望穹宇
          Make a wish, for your dream
          为你的梦许下愿望
          Something just may
          有些什么也许就
          Miracles
          奇迹也许就
          Come to you…
          会降临于你……
          Miracles
          奇迹
          They just may
          它们也许
          Miracles…
          奇迹……
          -Fin-


          IP属地:广东8楼2015-04-17 20:09
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            今天继续。怎能少了咎狗神ED《Still》。喜欢那种身负罪孽仍旧渴望光明的感觉。
            http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6DTJKm
            「Still」
            词\曲 ZIZZ
            歌 いとうかなこ
            Everything now ruthlessly torn apart
            如今,一切都被无情撕裂
            All the things once I had are gone
            我曾拥有的全部都已破灭
            Can't you hear, the dark blades of thenight
            你听不见吗,那黑夜的暗刃
            Craving for that wound you'll bleed
            正渴望着,你伤口将淌下的鲜血
            Lost of all tears
            失去了所有眼泪
            My sight blinded of faith
            我的眼睛看不到信仰
            Lost voices call in pain
            丧失的声音在痛苦中呐喊
            (But) nothing answers
            (却)没有回应
            Still I remember
            我仍旧记得
            (And) Still I see (yeah)
            我仍能看见
            Awoken in the scorched out land of grief
            在焦灼的忧伤土地上苏醒
            And yet something grows within
            有些什么仍然生长着
            Stretch out, ignite the light
            伸出手,引燃那光芒
            Can I still believe?
            我是否还能去相信?
            The Amber Sunset
            那琥珀色的夕阳
            The brown soil lullabies
            那褐色土壤的摇篮曲
            Green leaves on your skin
            飘落在你身上的绿叶
            Still I see (Still I believe)
            我仍能看见
            White morning lights
            白色的晨光
            The soothing of noon breeze
            午后抚慰般的和风
            Silence of the stars filled the nights
            夜晚漫天繁星的寂静
            Now shattered to pieces (all are butmemories)
            现在已分崩离析(沦为回忆)
            Still I remember
            我仍旧记得
            (And) Still I see (yeah)
            我仍能看见
            Breathing the sound of life
            轻声低语生命的声音
            Reviving the truth someday
            某天让真实重返
            Even through blinded eyes
            即使是用已盲的双眼
            Still I remember
            我仍旧记得
            (And) Still I see (yeah)
            我仍能看见
            Spawning the world with light
            引发充满光明的世界
            Hear the sound come to life
            倾听万物苏生的声音
            Even through blinded eyes
            即使是用已盲的双眼
            Still I see...
            我仍能看见……
            -Fin-


            IP属地:广东10楼2015-04-19 18:46
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              看到直江那么纠结的感情自己也郁结起来,翻译一篇歌词抒发吧,高潮部分听哭我,感觉很适合在罪孽中挣扎却痛苦地不想放手的直江。歌词有些宗教意味,这次也没有既成翻译参考,有点棘手吧,已经竭尽所能了OTL
              《LAMENTATION》
              http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o63e0Lc
              「 LAMENTATION」
              作词:宇野千佳
              作曲:桥本晶子
              编曲:亀山耕一郎
              歌:上野洋子、KATHY SHOWER
              Kyrie eleison
              Christe eleison
              Kyrie eleison
              Kyrie eleison...
              (经文,《慈悲经》——请垂怜)
              Oh, I'm weary with my moaning
              我已厌倦悲吟
              Lord hears the sound of my weeping
              天主闻我哭泣
              And I may feel alright
              我想我还好
              Although I have no reason to this life
              尽管我的生命没有意义
              Is it nothing to you, all you who's passin's by
              那对你无足轻重吗,你路过的一切
              See if there's any sorrow like my sorrow
              看看是否还有如我一样的悲伤
              I see this should be the glory of all the earth
              我想这该是尘世无上之荣耀
              or the perfection of beauty
              或最无瑕的美丽
              Hear how I groan
              听我叹息着
              Till the wind blows to my sails
              直到成风吹起船帆
              Has he gone into exile
              他是否已被放逐远行
              Hear how I groan
              听我叹息着
              Till the daylight dead and gone
              直到光明死去
              Turn, Oh Lord my God, watch over me
              转身吧,天主吾神,请垂幸我
              So, I'm living with my darkness
              就这样,我守着黑暗
              Nobody else but my spirit
              除了灵魂再无别人
              And I'm feeling okay
              我没事
              Though I still have no reason to this world
              尽管我对世界毫无意义
              Was it everything to you, all you've wanted for
              那是你最重要的吗,你渴望的一切
              See if there's any sorrow like my sorrow
              看看是否还有如我一样的悲伤
              I see no angels or glory of all the earth
              我看不到天使或光辉存在于世
              It's the perfection of sorrow
              这是完美的悲伤
              Hear how I moan
              听我悲吟着
              Till the power's in the sky
              直到力量到达天际
              He walks in his guilty ways
              他已踏上罪孽之路
              Hear how I moan
              听我悲吟着
              Till the flood sweeps over me
              直到洪流席卷我
              Answer me, Oh Lord, for your love is good
              回答我吧,天主,你的爱那样慈悲
              Get away! How lonely sits the city
              离开吧!这城市如此寂寞
              Far away to keep your purity
              远去吧,永保你的纯洁
              Fly away so you can be more free
              飞走吧,这样你就会更自由
              To remember all my tears stream down
              记住所有我流下的泪
              Hear how I groan
              听我叹息着
              Till the wind blows to my sails
              直到成风吹起船帆
              Has he gone into exile
              他是否已被放逐远行
              Hear how I groan
              听我叹息着
              Till the daylight dead and gone
              直到光明死去
              Turn, Oh Lord my God, watch over me
              转身吧,天主吾神,请垂幸我
              Hear how I moan
              听我悲吟着
              Till the power's in the sky
              直到力量到达天际
              He walks in his guilty ways
              他已踏上罪孽之路
              Hear how I moan
              听我悲吟着
              Till the flood sweeps over me
              直到洪流席卷我
              Answer me, Oh Lord, for your love is good
              回答我吧,天主,你的爱那样慈悲
              (经文)
              -Fin-


              IP属地:广东11楼2015-04-21 01:00
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                荒废了好久重操旧业……一首炎蜃印象曲,感觉像是景虎SAMA的心声。翻译时参考了两个版本,歧义较大,最后还是决定按自己的感觉来翻。也送给重要的人。http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dFsTiSh
                「Pearly Gates」
                曲:见良津健雄
                词:宇野千佳
                歌::PrefabSprout
                Why do I weep?
                为何我要哭泣?
                My eyes in tears and fear of the dark
                充满泪水和恐惧黑暗的眼睛
                Takes me nowhere else but haunts my soul
                让我无处可去,只是紧盯灵魂
                Why do I weep?
                为何我要哭泣?
                The tears roll down my cheeks in the dark
                眼泪在黑暗中滑过脸颊
                Cut all your grief and sorrow
                斩断你的痛苦与悲伤
                Throw them down to the land of haze
                抛弃在雾霭之地
                Visions, spinning like the wheels on fire
                幻影 如火轮转动
                It burns me up so cruel
                残酷地灼烧我
                Nowhere my destiny
                命运 除此之外
                No second chance
                再无可能
                Could not be sure if I'd live
                怀疑是否还能活着
                Cling to me
                抓紧我
                Then you set me free
                然后给我自由
                Hear me
                倾听我
                Come to my relief
                成为我的救赎
                Now please be good to me
                现在请善待我
                You set me free
                你让我自由
                Never wanna be the one to sigh
                永远不会想去叹息
                Ease me
                解放我
                Then you set me free
                然后给我自由
                Dare me
                挑战我
                Come to my relief
                成为我的救赎
                Now please be good to me
                现在请善待我
                You lead me to the Pearly Gate
                你将我领向天堂之扉
                Why do I keep my eye on destiny in the dark
                为何我注视着黑暗中的命运
                Take me somewhere else and heal my soul
                带我离开 治愈我的灵魂
                Why do I pray and get down on my knees inthe dark
                为何我在黑暗中跪膝祈祷
                Break out your grief and sorrow
                粉碎你的痛苦与悲伤
                Throw them over the top of haze
                抛弃在烟云之巅
                Behold chanting like the angels
                看 如天使般吟诵
                Enemies grind their teeth so cruel
                敌人咬牙切齿
                Oh where my destiny
                哦 命运何处
                No second chance
                再无选择
                Could not be true if I'd live
                难以继续活着
                Cling to me your destiny
                依附我 你的命运
                Heal me
                治愈我
                Come to my relief
                成为我的救赎
                Now please be good to me
                现在请善待我
                Your destiny never wanna get down on myknees
                你的命运 希望永远不再需要为它祈祷
                Ease me your destiny
                解放我 你的命运
                Hear me
                倾听我
                Come to my relief
                成为我的救赎
                Now please be good to me
                现在请善待我
                You lead me to the Pearly Gate
                你将我领向天堂之扉
                -Fin-


                IP属地:广东12楼2016-10-28 01:47
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