升华之井 chapter 42 p485 依兰德“心”想。 Elend thought. 为什么需要引号? chapter 40 p452 依兰德,我很抱歉,你必须看到那个景象。 Elend, I'm sorry you had to see that. 不是“必须”的意思吧 chapter 38 p431 纹从倒地的敌人身边踢起木杖,抓在手中,低咆一声,舞了个棍花冲上前去,引起一名射币的惊呼。其中之一反应颇快,临时钢推了长凳,往后窜走,却仍然被纹的武器击中,飞往一旁。木棍再一挥,打倒原本想逃走的另一名同伙。 Vin kicked up the staff of the man she'd just killed, catching it. A Coinshot cried out as she growled and dashed toward them, spinning her weapon. One had the presence of mind to Push off the bleachers and launch himself away. Vin's weapon still caught him in midair, throwing him to the side. The next swing took down his companion, who had tried to dash away. in midair没翻译出来。最后一句“木棍再一挥,打倒原本想逃走的另一名同伙。”这个句子的主语不奇怪么?再吹毛求疵的说一点,同一段话中“木杖”和“木棍”可以统一下? p430 白镴在她体内燃起,伤口躲在不过是疥藓之疾。 Pewter flared to life inside of her, and her wounds became mere annoying buzzes. 。。。 chapter 36 p405 他继续往前走,锡力增强的耳朵轻易就察觉到他的脚步声。 He continued to walk below, her tin-enhanced ears easily picking out his footfalls. 再次主语有问题
永世永雄 chapter40 p318 康纳德上尉 Lieutenant Conrad 仍然是上次的话题,关于军队建制,与现实世界的军队建制挂钩是否明智? chapter41 p324 魁利恩正大声数落死刑犯们的罪状 Quellion preached against the people about to be executed 用“数落”合适么? chapter42 p332 沼泽并非全不知道 Marsh didn't know them all 全部