叫黑暗之海更能和黑暗之地对应上吧。黑暗之海在召唤，黯海唤灵什么的

Summoning 不是进行时吗，而且对于我们来说黑暗海洋还是未知的，的召唤更应景

黑暗海洋的召唤好一点

暗海唤魂曲 应该是这样翻译的 毕竟是两个老头子唤回艾伦

暗海诏
I name the stars over your cauldron
吾赐星名悬巨釜，
And all that lies beneath your waves
万物留滞音波住，
Throwing my voice into your shadow
吾声洞穿覆身影，
The underworld the darkeset place
在至深至暗那处
The onyx kiss of inky waters
此景浑黄吮面
The jet black undertow of fright
此境黑恶横见
From the cold depths
便是极度深寒
now i will conjure
即刻吾施变幻
The spiral madness of his mind
至他念里成癫螺旋
Once more the ocean's a lake
无垠波涛化静湖
So alike a land awake
艾伦似岛破浪出
Come save your soul awake new and whole
魂解梦脱井然新
By name i will summon him
正以吾称他的名
From the silence of screams
来处尖啸齐喑去
Form the city of dreams
噩城魔魇骤清醒
It's a dark ocean summoning
致此暗海听吾诏应
The horror story falsely claiming
战栗诡叙，诬陷之语
Naming you servant of the night
囚得你作暗夜仆役
Now rise up by the name i'm calling
现将被吾正名苏生
Your soul returning to the light
冥灵复还光明
Once more the ocean's a lake
无垠波涛化静湖
So alike a land awake
艾伦似岛破浪出
Come save your soul awake new and whole
魂解梦脱井然新
By name i will summon him
正以吾称他的名
From the silence of screams
来处尖啸齐喑去
Form the city of dreams
噩城魔魇骤清醒
It's a dark ocean summoning
致此暗海听吾诏应

楼主现在有较好的歌词译版嘛