清明节心血来潮写的《往生社区》搁置了好久,今天横竖睡不着,脑子一抽接着写,后面干脆一不做二不休重写了。
前面还能按节奏来,后面想着赶紧写完赶紧睡觉,越写越睡不着,睡不着又想写,陷入死循环![](https://gsp0.baidu.com/5aAHeD3nKhI2p27j8IqW0jdnxx1xbK/tb/editor/images/client/image_emoticon9.png)
改后的文放楼下,虚心求建议![](https://gsp0.baidu.com/5aAHeD3nKhI2p27j8IqW0jdnxx1xbK/tb/editor/images/client/image_emoticon24.png)
吧里大佬们的建议我有采纳的。文无聊,像流水账,沉余内容多,抓不住主旨,内容碎等问题我尽量规避(能力有限,真的尽力了
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![](http://tiebapic.baidu.com/forum/w%3D580/sign=461ba91f47e9390156028d364bed54f9/e83662d0f703918f9a2e2cf5173d269759eec427.jpg?tbpicau=2024-07-12-05_5727b35deb23bdd6601b97dc64bd57bd)
前面还能按节奏来,后面想着赶紧写完赶紧睡觉,越写越睡不着,睡不着又想写,陷入死循环
![](https://gsp0.baidu.com/5aAHeD3nKhI2p27j8IqW0jdnxx1xbK/tb/editor/images/client/image_emoticon9.png)
改后的文放楼下,虚心求建议
![](https://gsp0.baidu.com/5aAHeD3nKhI2p27j8IqW0jdnxx1xbK/tb/editor/images/client/image_emoticon24.png)
吧里大佬们的建议我有采纳的。文无聊,像流水账,沉余内容多,抓不住主旨,内容碎等问题我尽量规避(能力有限,真的尽力了
![](https://gsp0.baidu.com/5aAHeD3nKhI2p27j8IqW0jdnxx1xbK/tb/editor/images/client/image_emoticon87.png)
![](http://tiebapic.baidu.com/forum/w%3D580/sign=461ba91f47e9390156028d364bed54f9/e83662d0f703918f9a2e2cf5173d269759eec427.jpg?tbpicau=2024-07-12-05_5727b35deb23bdd6601b97dc64bd57bd)