There's a grief that can't be spoken. 这份悲痛难以言说
There's a pain goes on and on. 这份疼痛永烧灼
Empty chairs at empty tables 桌椅之间 死寂空荡
Now my friends are dead and gone. 而今挚友亦陨落
Here they talked of revolution. 民主自由 耳畔尤响
Here it was they lit the flame. 点亮火光 照前方
Here they sang about `tomorrow' 故友传唱 未来方向
And tomorrow never came. 未来前路两茫茫
From the table in the corner 或坐或站 墙角桌旁
They could see a world reborn 本该见证其解放
And they rose with voices ringing 异军突起 口号响亮
and I can hear them now! 我听见 就现在
The very words that they had sung 字字句句人人传唱
Became their last communion 嘘悉数今成绝响
On the lonely barricade at dawn. 于黎明之孤堡前 唱响
Oh my friends, my friends forgive me 啊 挚友 挚友 原恕我
That I live and you are gone. 你我天人各一方
There's a grief that can't be spoken. 此份悲伤 何处去讲
There's a pain goes on and on. 难以愈合 痛且伤
Phantom faces at the window. 窗前浮现英灵面庞
Phantom shadows on the floor.英灵样貌映地上
Empty chairs at empty tables 桌椅之间 孤寂流淌
Where my friends will meet no more. 故友再也不赏光
Oh my friends, my friends, don't ask me 啊 挚友 至友 别问我
What your sacrifice was for 宝贵生命为谁豁
Empty chairs at empty tables 座椅之外 就只剩我
Where my friends will sing no more. 挚友啊 早已陨落

么人啊

吧主这能申精不？

On my own 孤身行
Pretending he's beside me 佯装你与我一起
All alone, I walk with him till morning 两条影 一路漫步至黎明
Without him 伊人离
I feel his arms around me 觉双臂环我更紧
And when I lose my way I close my eyes 我若是迷了路 一闭上眼睛
And he has found me 他现于梦境
In the rain the pavement shines like silver 淅沥间 人行道镶满白银
All the lights are misty in the river 街灯间 川流雾雨倒影
In the darkness, the trees are full of starlight 临近夜阑 枝头上挂满繁星
And all I see is him and me for ever and forever 映入眼帘 是我们俩 结同心 不分离
And I know it's only in my mind 怎不知 一切仅显于幻境
That I'm talking to myself and not to him 不过在自言自语 他没听
And although I know that he is blind 我深知 这份情无回应
Still I say, there's a way for us 然我信 会柳暗花明
I love him 独爱伊
But when the night is over 一旦是微光黎明
He is gone, the river's just a river 伊人去 川流平常无异
Without him the world around me changes 伊人离 世界再无熟悉
The trees are bare and everywhere 秃枝木 尽遍布嶙峋
The streets are full of strangers 人群光怪而陆离
I love him 独爱伊
But every day I'm learning 然每天越发明晰
All my life I've only been pretending 纵一生 我始终不过演戏
Without me his world will go on turning 我若去 他的世界翻天覆地
A world that's full of happiness 那世界 快乐撒满地
That I have never known! 我却未曾亲历
I love him 独爱伊
I love him 独爱伊
I love him 独爱伊
But only on my own. 伊人了无回应

大家的点评我都听进去了，试着译配一下简单的LOOK DOWN试试，试试完全白话，能不能有那种效果
Look down look Down别看 上边
Don't Look 'em in the eye那双眼尖又尖
Look down look down别留 期盼
You're here until you die这基本是阴间
No God above上帝 不见
And Hell alone below脚下无尽深渊
Look down look down算算 时间
There's twenty years to go还剩下二十年
I've done no wrong我本 有冤
Sweet Jesus hear my prayer耶稣你快听见
Look down look down那你 自便
Sweet Jesus doesn't care神根本听不见
I know she'll wait她不 会变
I know that she'll be true她不会也叛变
Look down look down是你 犯贱
They've all forgotten you没人会那么贱
When I get free我要逃离
You won't see me别怪我急
Here by dust一日千里
Look down look downn一进 牢里
You'll always be a slave你永远是奴隶
Look down look down你在这里
You're standing in your grave一半在坟墓里